Music Monday: Good Girl – Carrie Underwood

Her Father’s Choice is complete (for now) and off to a couple of readers to begin the polishing process, which means it is time to start considering the next story. The next one, tentatively titled No Other Choice is Mary’s quest to find a happily ever after.  She’s a good girl…prone to pontificate and lecture but good.  Hopefully, she will find what she is looking for without too much trouble along the way.  (I have a longish excerpt from the end of my current book below that begins to set up what might happen in the next book.)

“Good Girl- Carrie Underwood Lyrics.” YouTube. Video created for and uploaded to YouTube by Heartlandlover74395, 23 Feb. 2012.

From No Other Choice:

“Mrs. Bennet,” said Lady Sophia as she took Mrs. Bennet’s arm.  “This is a fine fete.  One of the best I have attended, and I am not given to meaningless flattery.” Together, the two ladies walked toward the far end of the room where the piano had been placed.  Georgiana and Mary were seated comfortably at it taking turns playing.  “My niece will no doubt be returning to her brother’s home as soon as he and Mrs. Darcy are settled, and I shall be quite alone.”

“But do you not have a son?” asked Mrs. Bennet.

“I do,” said Lady Sophia, “but he is often gone to our estate and when he is in town he has his friends and clubs.  He is not inattentive, mind you, but he is not the sort to sit about and stitch with his mother.”

“I would be surprised if any gentleman were the sort to do so,” said Mrs. Bennet in surprise.

“Precisely,” said Lady Sophia.  She watched Mary turn the pages for Georgiana.  It was a friendship she was glad to see and wished to nurture for the sake of both young ladies.  “I was wondering if I might be so bold as to ask that you allow me the company of one of your daughters. I have the means by which to sponsor a young lady for a season and Miss Mary is such a delight.”

“Mary?” Mrs.Bennet looked at Mary as if never having seen the girl before.  “Mary is a delight?”

“Indeed, I find her so, but I am not typical.” said Lady Sophia.

“You would like to give my Mary a season in town?”  The excitement was building in Mrs. Bennet’s voice.

“Yes, Mrs. Bennet, I would, and as a Countess and the mother of the Earl Rycroft, I can guarantee she would be given the greatest opportunities to meet and mingle with many eligible young gentlemen.”  She smiled and whispered.  ” You may find yourself with three married daughters before any of the others have even one; although, I cannot guarantee it will happen, I do think with a bit of specific training ─ which I can arrange ─ she will take quite well.  You may even find she has more than one offer.”

“Oh, my lady, you do us a great honor.  I would be delighted to allow Mary to stay with you for the season.” Mrs. Bennet’s fan fluttered with the excitement of it all.

“Very good,” said Lady Sophia.  “I am elated to know I shall have such excellent company.”

Mary had not meant to be listening, but being close to where her mother and Lady Sophia were talking, she had heard the majority of the conversation.  She was to go to town for the season?

“Oh, Mary,” whispered Georgiana,”I shall be so glad to have you near. Is it not exciting?”

Mary nodded, a sense of freedom welled within her.

“Of what are we conversing about in whispers, dear cousin,” said Lord Rycroft drawing a chair near them.

Mary lifted a brow in disapproval.  “It is not polite to ask about another’s private conversations.”

“I do apologize, Miss Mary, but you both looked so delighted, I found myself overcome by curiosity.”  It was not the first apology he had offered her, and he suspected it would not be last.  He had offended her, and true to what Darcy had said, a Bennet lady did not forgive an offense readily.  She had said she accepted the apology, but her manners still said otherwise.  “Would it be impolite of me to request that you play that last song once again? I rather enjoyed it.”

She gave him a wary look.  “Some might find it repetitive to listen to the same piece twice in a row.”  She took her music from the instrument.  “I shall play it, but not until after I have had a moment to walk about and partake of a glass of punch.”  She rose and dipped a quick curtsey. “If you will excuse me.”

“Did you offend her?” asked Georgiana turning toward her cousin.

“Why do you ask?” He said stretching his legs out in front of him.

“Because she was rather cross.”  Georgiana crossed her arms and scowled at him.

“I may have said something as a jest that she found offensive, but I have apologized.  She is just unwilling to forgive.”

“Hmph,” huffed Georgiana.  She spread her music out on the piano and began to play. “Since you have driven her away, you will need to pay attention so that you might turn the pages for me.”


Music Monday: High Valley, Love You for a Long Time

I heard this song several times this week on the radio or was it during my YouTube surfing…or perhaps it was both. (It was probably both. 🙂 ) Anyway, it is a song I like from a group I enjoy listening to, and it kind of got stuck in my head.  I found it often coming to mind as I was writing which seemed appropriate since the story has reached the point where Elizabeth has finally realized that she does love Darcy.

Part of the lyrics of the song say this:

Long as there’s a breath in me,
Right down to my last heartbeat,
Long as your blue eyes shine,
I’ll love you, love you for a long time

So let the storm clouds roll,
Let the rain fall down,
‘Til the good Lord calls me home,
I’ll be around, I’ll be around

And that, I believe, is what Darcy is expressing in this snippet. (WARNING:  This little excerpt might need a SPOILER alert…read at your own risk. 😉 )

From Her Father’s Choice:

Mary shifted and leaned against the wall of the coach instead of her sister.  Elizabeth watched Mary to see if she was going to stay situated, then she slipped across the coach to sit on the bench next to Mr. Darcy, whose eyes immediately flew open letting her know her assessment of his lack of sleep was indeed accurate.  

“May I sit here for a moment?” she asked.   

“For as long as you wish,” he said. There was a hint of grogginess to his voice.  He was tired, but thoughts of his own father’s passing kept him from sleep.  He knew the pain of losing a parent for he had done so twice over.  

“I wanted to thank you.” Elizabeth placed her hand on top of his. “You knew exactly what needed to be done to have us travelling as soon as possible.”   

He turned his hand over where it lay under hers and twined his fingers with hers.  “I understand the urgency of such a trip as this,” he said softly.   

She nodded, unable to speak  for a moment as the tears once again threatened.  She tightened her grasp on his hand, finding comfort in his strength.  “Thank you,” she whispered once again.  “For caring for me.”  

He turned his face toward her.  “I will always care for you.”  


Music Monday: Brian Crain – Pastel Garden

While writing, I often have a YouTube Music to Write By playlist that will repeat over and over in the background through my headset. Sometimes, like this week, I search out new instrumental music to add to the list.  Today’s video has found its way onto my list.  I enjoy Brian Crain’s music, and this video…well, it has distracted me from writing with its prettiness, so, of course, I had to share it with you.  Enjoy!

“BRIAN CRAIN – Pastel Garden, Piano and Light.” YouTube. Video Created and uploaded by Andreea Petcu. March 2, 2013

So what was I writing this week while this song was playing? A couple of confrontations and this one important realization.

From Her Father’s Choice (my current work in rough progress 🙂 ):

Elizabeth settled into the seat and attempted to listen to the conversation around her, but her mind kept wandering back to the conversation with Miss Ivison and Miss Pearce. She had felt a need to defend herself, but it was not what truly inspired her to speak as she had. What was it about Mr. Darcy that made her feel a need to see that he was well and that his name was not harmed?

“Oh!” Her hand flew to her mouth and her eyes grew wide as understanding dawned on her.

“Are you well?” asked Lady Sophia.

Elizabeth smiled brightly. “I am well. I was merely woolgathering.” She now saw her dislike for those two women and Miss Bingley for what it was. Mr. Darcy had touched her heart, and she was jealous.

Mary looked at her doubtfully. “Are you certain you are well, Lizzy?”

Elizabeth nodded. “I am well. Very, very well.” And, she added to herself, quite possibly in love.


Music Monday: Austenland – Apologize

“Austenland – Apologize.” YouTube. Video created for and uploaded to YouTube by Radina Steven, February 3, 2014.

It seems that Darcy often ends up apologizing for some slight or blunder, both in the original story by Jane Austen and in many JAFF stories. My current work in progress is no different in that regard. Elizabeth has heard the slight at the assembly, and during a walk, Darcy is attempting to explain why he said what he did. Here is a small snippet of how well that went.

From Her Father’s Choice

 “I never said you were not handsome.”

Her eyes were wide with surprise.  “You did not?”

He crossed his arms and glared at her. “No, I did not.  I said you were not handsome enough to tempt me to dance.”

“You did not say to dance.”

He closed his eyes and tried to rein in his frustration.  “It was implied.  As I said, I was in no mood to dance that evening.  You could have been Aphrodite herself, and you would not have been handsome enough to tempt me to dance for I had no intention of dancing.”

“I see.”  She stepped passed him and began walking away.  She needed space to think.

Darcy watched her walking away and silently cursed Bingley’s idea to be more open.  Explaining himself to Bingley was never this difficult. This was like trying to reason with Georgiana.


Music Monday: As She’s Walking Away, Zac Brown Band

This song was playing on the car radio the other day as I was driving out to a camp where my school was holding a beginning of the year retreat.  The scenery on this drive is beautiful and is really just the  perfect sort to “prime the imagination pumps”.  Well, my brain was thinking Jane Austen thoughts (as it often does 😉 ) as this song began to play.  Immediately, I thought the lyrics fit Darcy quite nicely, especially this phrase

“and my heart won’t tell my mind to tell my mouth what it should say”

I also thought of the 2005 adaptation of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice.  I love how the role of Darcy is played in this version because the portrayal, in my opinion, shows the struggle that Darcy has in trying to overcome his feelings for Miss Elizabeth.  So, I thought I would share a clip of the movie below the song.  This clip is one of my favourites and features Lizzy walking away from a Darcy who looks as if he wants to say something.  (And yes, I know this scene is not in the book. 🙂 )

“Zac Brown Band – As She’s Walking Away.” YouTube. Uploaded to YouTube by Zac Brown Band September 13, 2010.
“Pride and Prejudice – Encourage Affection.” YouTube. Uploaded to YouTube by Christa McKinney on August 5, 2008.