Music Monday: Napoleonic Ball, Cotillion and Reel

“Napoleonic Ball – Regency Dances: Cotillion and Reel.” YouTube. Created for and uploaded to YouTube by Hedocurean’s Channel, 06 Dec. 2011.

I have been listening to and watching many regency dances this week as I wrote. This cotillion is the dance I was thinking of as I wrote the following scene:

From No Other Choice:

He tipped his head to the side.  “I see what you are at.”

She fluttered her eyes and smiled sweetly at him.  “I assure you I am at nothing.”

“You are angry, and so you refuse to speak to me.”

“I am sure I have not refused to speak. I believe I have answered all your questions.”  The music began, and she took his hand and curtseyed as he bowed before taking Georgiana’s hand and beginning to circle.

When she had crossed over and back toward him, he said, “But your answers have been abrupt, and you seem adverse to conversation.”

She crossed over and back to him.  “My answers were concise for I am intent upon my lesson.  Now, if you would be so kind as to allow me to concentrate on my steps and the music.”  She gave a small nod of her head as if thanking him for his compliance as they parted and came back together again.

He continued progressing through the steps in silence, his stiff muscles relaxing and the activity bringing alertness to his mind.   As he danced, he watched Mary.  Her steps were precise and soft.  Her movements graceful, and if he was not mistaken, he heard her softly humming the tune.  The joy on her face gave further evidence that she did indeed enjoy dancing while her skills told him that she had danced often. It was a delightful picture, one that brought a smile to his lips.  Soon the music slowed and came to an end.

“Much improved Miss Darcy,” said the dancing master.

“You can return in two days, can you not?” asked Lady Sophia.  “Miss Mary’s time to prepare for the season is limited.”

The gentleman inclined his head, a smile crinkled the skin around his eyes.  “I would return everyday to dance with Miss Bennet, but I have other students, so I shall have to be content to wait two days before I return.”  He gave Lord Rycroft an appraising look.  “It would do well if the ladies had an opportunity to practice once between now and our next lesson.”  He cocked his head to the side and both brows rose as he waited for Lord Rycroft to respond.

“I have business─” he began but a small cough from his mother stopped him.  “but, I am certain I can find a few moments to be of assistance.”  The instructor turned to Miss Darcy.  “Do you have the music for the dances we did today?”

“I do.”

“Then perhaps you could play for Miss Bennet and Lord Rycroft, and then Miss Bennet ─ you do play, Miss Bennet, do you not?”  He waited for her assurance that she did play before continuing.  “Then you must play for Miss Darcy and Lord Rycroft.”  He gave a sharp nod of his head indicating that the plan was good and the discussion at an end.  Then, with a quick scold to the musician to be quick, he donned his hat and coat and took up his walking stick.

“You dance so very well,” said Georgiana.  “I wish I could do as well.”

Mary put an arm around Georgiana’s shoulders.  “You will.  I have had more practice is all.”

Georgiana shook her head.  “My feet do not always follow my head.”

“That is the problem,” said Lord Rycroft.  “You must not dance in your head.”  He smiled as Mary rolled her eyes.  Finally, he had gotten a response that was not prim or proper as all her others had been today. “You do not believe me, Miss Mary?”

His tone was teasing which caused Mary to both bristle and become wary.  It would be very easy to scold and reprimand if he were allowed to tease.  So, instead of responding with an I most definitely do not, she said, “I await your explanation, sir.”  And then she gave him as sweet a smile as she could.

One of his brows rose slightly and his mouth became a displeased line instead of the tempting smile it had been.  She was definitely playing at something.  He had given her the chance to instruct  him on the need to know the dance in one’s head before it could become a learned pattern for the body, but she had not taken it.  And now, he need to explain something he was not sure he could explain.   “Well,” he began.  “The steps must first be known by the head, of course, but,” he glanced at the pianoforte and remembered how Georgiana seemed to flow along the keys with the music, “but it is the heart which must be engaged with the music, as it is when you play.  Do you count the notes and timing?”

She shook her head.  “I did at first but no longer.”

“Ah.”  He smiled as he saw Mary’s eyes narrow.  He was certain she had hoped he would not have an explanation.  “If you do not count, how is it that you can play as it is written?”

A smile spread across Georgiana’s face.  “My heart and body feel it.”

“Just so.”  He tapped her on the nose.  “Would you agree, Miss Mary?”  Her eyes narrowed just a bit more, and he smiled just a bit more broadly.

“I would.”  She moved toward the instrument.  “However, sometimes, fingers and feet do not learn at the same rate.  One may require more practice than the other.”  She took up a piece of music which lay on a bench near the pianoforte.  “If you will excuse me,”  she looked at him and then toward the door, “my fingers do not learn as readily as my feet.”

Instead of leaving as she had clearly signaled she wanted him to do, he pulled a chair close to where she took her seat at the instrument.  “You may require assistance with the pages, ” he explained when she looked up at him with brows drawn close  in question.

Her shoulders drooped a bit as she sighed.  Avoiding Lord Rycroft was becoming a challenge. “I would not wish to keep you from your business.”

He waved the idea way.  “My business can wait.  I have worked at it all morning and desire some time away from it.”


Her Father’s Choice, Chapter 4

HFC front coverThis has been a bit of a stressful week on the publication front. The Kindle version of Her Father’s Choice is still not available in the Kindle store despite being published a week ago. Something has gone wrong in the technical realm and after many emails to Amazon, their technical people are looking into the issue.  They have told me that I should have an answer by the end of day November 12.  However, the ebook is available at Kobo and the print version is available on Amazon.

I have not yet figured out how best to share my books here after they are published.  So, for now, I will include an excerpt of the chapter below which will be followed by a link which for the next week will take you to the rest of the chapter.  However, at the end of the week, this chapter will become unavailable and the next one will become available.

 

Chapter 4

Lady Sophia tapped her toe as she waited in the sitting room with Georgiana at Darcy House. “He should expect me to be early. I always am.” She straightened her sleeve. “I am curious to meet the lady who has finally captured your brother.”

“Captured would be the proper word for it,” said Richard entering the room and giving first his aunt a kiss and then Georgiana. “I did not realize you were coming today, Georgiana.”

Georgiana pursed her lips and looked at her aunt. “I was not supposed to come.”

“An omission made in error, I am sure.”

Georgiana looked at her aunt doubtfully. “My brother does not make errors of omission. He is the most fastidious correspondent.”

“Ah, well, your brother does not get married every day, either.” She smiled and raised her brows, which combined with the twinkle in her eye, made her look very impertinent. “He will see his error as soon as I have explained it to him.” She patted Georgiana’s hand reassuringly before turning to Richard. “Now, tell me why captured is the proper word.”

“It seems – ” began Richard.

“That I am the topic of gossip within my own home,” finished Darcy as he entered the room and gave Richard a stern look. “Georgiana! It is a surprise to see you.” He placed a kiss on his sister’s cheek while giving a questioning look to his aunt.

Continue Reading Chapter 4

 

 


Music Monday: Kiss Me-Period Dramas

This past week has been a busy one.  I have done some writing, but I have spent much of my writing time editing and publishing Her Father’s Choice, which means I have no story connection for this week’s music selection.  So, since there is no story connection, I thought we could enjoy these clips of stories set to music.  🙂  Have a great Monday!

“Kiss Me – Period Dramas.” YouTube. Created and uploaded to YouTube by Maggie Peters, 29 Jan. 2013.

Her Father’s Choice, Publishing News and Chapter 3

I have great news on the publishing front.  Her Father’s Choice is currently available on Kobo and in progress on Kindle and as a print book.  I am just waiting for KDP to complete its review and publishing process and for a physical proof copy of the cover in order to finish the publication process.

Now, I do like to make my work available to be read for free for those who do not have the budget to buy books as often as they might like.  However, once the book is published, I cannot leave up much of the book on my site (there are rules about this). So, I am posting a chapter today, but taking down the previous chapters and reviewing my options to still make the story available and meet contract regulations.

Continuing on that theme…While I do understand the lack of budget for books (find myself there often) and I do have a commitment to providing free reading material (I love my readers!), I also pay my bills from the money made on book sales. So, I appreciate all those who show me their support through reading and commenting (such a great motivation) and through purchasing and/or sharing about my books.  (Remember, you can follow me on Facebook and Twitter.)

Now, on to the story…

HFC front coverChapter 3

(Excerpt)

Elizabeth stood looking out the front window of her uncle’s house in Gracechurch Street, watching Darcy’s coach make its way through the early evening traffic. She pulled in her lip and bit it softly as she considered the man within the coach.  As she had promised Jane two days ago, she had questioned everything about him.  Yesterday, she had questioned him in regards to his attention to his tenants and his staff.  She had asked him of his father and of his steward.  She had even dared to ask about his supposed betrothal to his cousin. He had patiently borne all her inquiries.  She was beginning to run out of questions about his character, which left her in a very uncomfortable state, for she knew that she must also examine her own character, a character that seemed wanting, having so misjudged Mr. Darcy, a character which had fallen easy prey to the pretty words of a charmer.  She sighed.

Mrs. Gardiner placed an arm around Elizabeth’s shoulders. “He seems very pleasant.”

“A right proper gentleman,” agreed her uncle.

“Not at all as you described,” said her aunt softly.

Elizabeth’s shoulders lifted slightly and then dropped. “I may have misjudged him.” She turned sad eyes to her aunt. “I do not know who he is. I was so sure I knew, but I do not.”

“Ah, my dear. Something tells me you know more than you will allow yourself to admit.” Mrs. Gardiner turned Elizabeth away from the window. “We should get you and Mary installed in your room.” She led Elizabeth from the room and started up the stairs. “You will, of course, have to share your story of how you became betrothed to a man you were so set against. I have had your father’s version, but I would like to hear yours.” She turned to the right at the top of the stairs and opened the second door on her left. “Your uncle has brought home some lovely laces and a few pieces of silk he thought you might like. I have to say, your uncle has an excellent eye for colour. You would look lovely in all of them, so you shall have a dress from each. Mrs. Havelston has lent me her book of fashions. She knows how much you dislike spending hours in her shop choosing fabrics and patterns, and our time is limited.”

Elizabeth sat heavily on the bed while Mary opened a trunk and began the task of unpacking. “It is all too much.”

“Are you indeed your mother’s daughter?” Mrs. Gardiner crossed her arms and gave Elizabeth an amused but quizzical look.

A small laugh escaped Mary. “She has been for three days now.”

Elizabeth gasped.

“You have been a ball of nerves ever since the ball,” explained Mary.

“I am being forced to marry a man I barely know because my aunt created a scene. You would not be a picture of serenity either if it were you.”

Mary shrugged. “Perhaps I would be as distraught as you if I were to be forced to marry a wealthy, handsome gentleman who obviously cared for me, but I rather doubt it.” Mary hung a gown in the wardrobe. “Mr. Darcy is not so very bad. You could have to marry Mr. Collins.”

 


Music Monday: All of Me (Jon Schmidt)

This is such a fun, rousing song that I thought it would be appropriate for the end of one book and the beginning of another since both of those feelings of accomplishment and possibilities, as well as the busyness of publishing, are exhilarating. Her Father’s Choice is complete, and I am working on getting it published. But, I have also started the next book, and below the video, I have included an excerpt from what might become part of the first chapter of that novella.

“All of Me (Jon Schmidt) – ThePianoGuys.” YouTube. Uploaded to YouTube, 3 Oct. 2011, ThePianoGuys.

Excerpt from No Other Choice by Leenie Brown

Lord Samuel Rycroft blinked and looked at his mother as if he was unable to understand what she had said. He took of his hat and placed it on the table in the entry way at Netherfield. “Pardon me?”

“I said we will depart for town when Miss Mary arrives.”  His mother made her way back into the sitting room and peered out the window.  “There is no need to fear.  She knows I am always early.”

“I am still not understanding why we must wait for Miss Mary.”

“Good morning, Georgiana,” said Lady Sophia.  “Did you have something to eat, my dear?”

“Yes, thank you.” Georgiana took a seat near the window so that she could see the drive.  “I cannot wait for Miss Mary to arrive. It will be ever so pleasant to have her company.””

“Company?” Lord Rycroft’s brows drew together.  “Surely, we must not wait for you to finish a visit before leaving.”

Georgiana laughed.  “A visit?  At this time of the morning?  I think not, cousin.  She is to travel with us.”

Lady Sophia sighed at her son’s still puzzled expression.  “She is coming to stay with me. Georgiana will soon be able to return to her brother, and I do not wish to be lonely.”  She smoothed her skirt over her legs.  With her eyes lowered as they were she could not see his expression, which was her intent, but she could see his toe start to tap as the silence in the room grew.  She looked up at him with a smile and then turned to look out the window.

“A project, Mother?”  It was not unlike his mother to take on a less fortunate lady and help her to find a husband.

“No, not a project, a friend.”   She turned back to look at him.  “I do like to have company of the female sort, and if they happen to be of the young marriageable age and in need of some assistance, it makes me feel useful. It has been all arranged.  Miss Mary will travel with us today and stay the week.  We will visit the shops and arrange for her orders. Then she will return home with her aunt and uncle for Christmas and will return in the new year to participate in the season.”

“A project.”  He ran his hands through his hair and shook his head.  “And I am supposed to pay for this project?”

Lady Sophia crossed her arms.  “Miss Mary is not a project.  She is a friend and a guest of mine.”

“Aunt,” said Georgiana softly.

Lord Rycroft sighed.  “And you shall require me to attend all of the functions you select?”

“Well,” said Lady Sophia ignoring Georgiana’s second soft call, “we shall need an escort, and you need to attend anyway if we ever expect to find you a wife.”

“We do not need to find me a wife.  I can do that on my own.”  He hated being reminded of his duty to the title and his need to marry.  He had been looking, but there were not any young ladies who interested him.  They were all so agreeable, so biddable, so boring.

“You have done a poor job of it thus far, my son.”  Lady Sophia cocked her head to the side and gave him a stern look.  “If you will remember, I gave you until this season to sort it out for yourself. Now, I will assist you.  The deadline has passed for you to continue on without my interference.”

“Fine.”  His eyes narrowed and his jaw clenched slightly.  “I shall trot about with you and your project, Miss Mary, but I shall make my own decision.”  He stiffened as he heard a gasp from the doorway behind him.

“Miss Mary,” Georgiana greeted Mary as excitedly as she could in an effort to counteract her cousin’s words.  “I have been anxiously awaiting your arrival.”

Mary smiled as she always did when her father or mother or younger sisters said something insulting.  It was not as if she was not well-prepared for handling such situations.